I'm Late For Work!
Robert's closing line was cheesy when I wrote it 4 hours ago: "Not if you let me stay.", but 3 hours and 55 minutes ago it become "I'm late for work!," which in the context of the novel fits MUCH better.
But I am terrible at endings, so I will be trying to get someone to read this epilogue and give me suggestions. The former suggestion for radio transcripts in one narrative fit perfectly, so I may go to the same source.
But for all intents and purposes, the book is finished. Almost 10 years later (8 to be exact), I think it's finally done, minus the small tweaks that any manuscript needs.
zOMG. I knew I skipped class today for a reason.
But I am terrible at endings, so I will be trying to get someone to read this epilogue and give me suggestions. The former suggestion for radio transcripts in one narrative fit perfectly, so I may go to the same source.
But for all intents and purposes, the book is finished. Almost 10 years later (8 to be exact), I think it's finally done, minus the small tweaks that any manuscript needs.
zOMG. I knew I skipped class today for a reason.
Labels: closing line, manuscript, Nocturnal Melee, novel, writing
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